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Jan 28, 2008
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To Surrender
Her lips full and tender.
Her eyes glaze with passion.
And she surrenders.
His caresses turn possessive.
He takes of her deep and fiercely.
Her knees tremble with extacy.
She surrenders her body to him.
He takes what she willingly gives.
A love long denied.
They quench their thirst for each other.
But only for this moment.
For a thirst like this one,
Is never quenched for long.
Comments
professor
18 years 3 months ago
Wake up
IKnowNoBox
18 years 3 months ago
I like the effect of the shorting stanzas