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It's good to be Sarkozy!

Life is looking rosyIf you’re NicholasSarkozy He is happy as a doveSmitten withNew love Some say that he's loonyBut, he is datingCarla Bruni He has taken herTo Egypt's sandAnd even ParisDisneyland He's lost all senseHe's lost all tactHis antics they do distract What's the point of candor?When you’re a serialPhilanderer Who needs monogamy?When you're onNumber three Who needs faithful and smart?When you can haveEuro-tart! Who cares about saving France?When you can get in her pantsIt's good to be Sarkozy!

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poewriter58

18 years 3 months ago

Interesting write. Your

Interesting write. Your rhyming is excellent nice flow to it . Amusing work well done
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 3 months ago

I like this Michael

smart and funny. The line "His antics they do distract" jars a bit, does it need "they"? One thing I don't get, are these famous people I've never heard of or fictional characters? Does it matter? cheers, Jess
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Michael Landau

18 years 3 months ago

Nicholas Sarkozy is the president of France.

Nicholas Sarkozy is the president of France. Carla Bruni is a former model, but now she is a singer in France. Recently, he divorced his wife. About two months ago, he met Carla Bruni. Now, he travels everywhere with her and there's more coverage of his love life, than his political plans for the future. There's a lot of discussion in France now as to whether there's too much of a focus on his personal life. Many feel that it is inappropriate for him to be running around with a beautiful new girlfriend, so soon after divorcing his wife. I get the impression that such things are standard practice in France, however it is important to be tactful about such things, and he is certainly not doing that. She has already said that she doesn't believe in monogamy, so if they get married, they will probably get divorced. He's already been divorced twice, so divorce number three is probably coming soon. I'm not sure how it would sound to take out the word "they". Do you have a specific suggestion? Thank-you for your comment! Michael
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 3 months ago

I am so embarrassed.

Time to pull my head out of the sand and read a paper or watch the news! Regarding that line, it is basicly just too long and breaks the flow. I suggest shortening it to match the rest of the metre whatever change you make, cheers, Jess
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barbsdad2003

18 years 3 months ago

Delightful humor ...

here, even if it is with a bite. Insightful ... and brings smiles to my already wrinkled face. Yours, Chuck
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akabeks

17 years 8 months ago

Sarkozy.....

Sarkozy should join Hefner in the Play boy mansion. That is where he belong.I think he's a confused man... akabeks