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Perfectly Pathetic

 Ever word torn out of misery's manuscript

why is it so...They ask over and over.

will not/chooses not to use the merry exit at all

suspicious of those who come with solutions

or salve "Do you not sympathize with my Woe?"

 

It is the score for the "I am not whole...yet I must

Carry all this crap that comes from others

forced on me as my views!"

so insults stack up to build drama sets

complete with  mood swing sets

 a spiral slide to bring you down

to window painted dark basements

into a corner where you can be alone

isolated from anybody that is not

caught up in your once valid drama

 

but pity those who care anymore

or have something that may shed

light upon your petulant sorrow

the continuous repetitious

re visitation of and tearing the scabs

is just about you now  the attention

you "get" from it is soon to be dirt

on your grave...

so save it ...all that "life-really-hates-me

because-they- don't -agree-with-me

one hundred percent."

 some have a reason why they

feel strongly against somethings

don't float on depression here

 

I will not interrupt your party of one

and soon you will find your self

without any party supplies

that even those who lead you

to think you needed all the Woe

say Whoa and get on with life in whole

with out the luggage you carry

FOR WHAT ....?????

To be more Woe then THOU!!!!!

 

— IKnowNoBox, Dec 18, 2007

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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