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Perfectly Pathetic
Ever word torn out of misery's manuscript
why is it so...They ask over and over.
will not/chooses not to use the merry exit at all
suspicious of those who come with solutions
or salve "Do you not sympathize with my Woe?"
It is the score for the "I am not whole...yet I must
Carry all this crap that comes from others
forced on me as my views!"
so insults stack up to build drama sets
complete with mood swing sets
a spiral slide to bring you down
to window painted dark basements
into a corner where you can be alone
isolated from anybody that is not
caught up in your once valid drama
but pity those who care anymore
or have something that may shed
light upon your petulant sorrow
the continuous repetitious
re visitation of and tearing the scabs
is just about you now the attention
you "get" from it is soon to be dirt
on your grave...
so save it ...all that "life-really-hates-me
because-they- don't -agree-with-me
one hundred percent."
some have a reason why they
feel strongly against somethings
don't float on depression here
I will not interrupt your party of one
and soon you will find your self
without any party supplies
that even those who lead you
to think you needed all the Woe
say Whoa and get on with life in whole
with out the luggage you carry
FOR WHAT ....?????
To be more Woe then THOU!!!!!
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