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The Coin
I took a stroll the other day,
and even though the day was grey
I spied children playing in the sun,
an elderly couple holding hands,
and a coin that had not lost it's lustre.
So, I put the coin in my pocket.
I continued walking.
I walked until I met up with a vendor...
..and he yearned for my pocket to be empty.
So, I took the coin from my pocket,
and even though the day was old...
..the night was young and full of promise.
I purchased from him, his wares...
..and the vendor sold a wish to me,
and quickly, I wished for more wishes.
Then, I walked the night.
With nothing in my pockets, at all...
..but a heart full of hope to keep me warm.
I walked in the moonlight, that night...
..'til a passerby appeared,
and he was dry of the magic of Hope.
He yearned for what was in my possession.
So, I shared with him my dream of Hope...
..and then put his coin in my empty pocket.
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