Lost Sister

I lost a dear friend today.
And people ask me what's wrong.
I lost my sister today,
And I am so alone.
She was my idol and I adored her so,
She got killed by a drunk driver,
And I wish she didnt go.
I love my dear friend...my sister;
She was always there to guide me,
She was an angel from up above;
And she had a life to live.
But her life was short thanks to that guy,
Who got behind the wheel to drive.
He killed my sister,
And he should pay; by being sent to jail today.
But he is free still, because he left,
He left before the cops could arrest.
And I cry every night thinking of the unjust;
And hopefully someday, he will regret...
For leaving my sister, to die like that.

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Sinbadthesailorman

18 years 3 months ago

Heart felt And so sorry for your lost and yes it is one of the

more thought out and desinged of the your works I have read so far but you posses the qualities and the wording of a up and comming poet I think once you have put it to paper you leave it As I do most of the time but I always reread what I have written time and time again I rearange quite often the wording for I must but if you would stop and refeel what you have penned you may clearly see the feeling that is sent is it the feeling that you meant Is it Loss or is it anger or is it sadness or is it all of it wound tight in a ball in the pit of your soul and you would track the man and make him pay this is very passive I would expect if I had lost a dear friend to be Mad as Hell And I am most passive person I know till I read this poem your telling me how you feel make me feel what it is and wham a peom has become a memory yours and now mine as it stands its yours and I feel for you but, when you make me feel for the lost what have you done NICE share work on it you much to share here and so would like to feel the hurt I know is there Donnie/Sinbad