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TICKTOCK

Behold, this past and present friendly face
in a brief evening's span transmogrified
to signal lover, future tense.

The mind-clock stutters, slows and stops;
the unexpected tension coils and winds.
 
The clock intones: take your time,
though time may none too gently
take you, mould you, measure out
your minutes and your years
The task remains:
pass the time, though time passes you
choose the time or time chooses you'
ticks questions of time,
tocks answers of lovers.

Always together, tick with tock

And was there ever a moment
when time was tethered, tick-tock tied?'
Ah, yes, a precious instant
an all-too-brief eternity
when aeons birthed and died
when stars, galaxies brightly burst
and suns engendered
glorified a universe with light
and in the fluttering fall of lashes
and the opened secret of colluding lips
time was tamed.
With a flick of skirt,
and a backward glance awash with wonderment,
she leaves this chanced on man behind.

The clock ticks on this changeling night,
the motor sputters, and the car drives on.  

Time passed, and passes still.

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DeWaal

18 years 5 months ago

In the end it's you and me

Hello Mike I see you had a good run lately. You seem to bursting with poetry :). I envy you. I decided to comment on this poem as it somehow stands out from the others. The poem makes the reader aware of the inexorable forward movement of time in a vivid, almost tactile way. Human relationships and the birth of galaxies are somehow presented in the same breath. This is no mean feat as one can hardly think of a larger difference of scale between two concepts. In the end, the poem reveals the human soul. Time is a phenomenon that is beyond the grasp of the mind, human relationships are in the end where we find the core of ourselves. I think this is fair to say that this is the trademark of you poetry, Mike. This is your strength. Regards De Waal
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meic

18 years 5 months ago

Envy not required - the

Envy not required - the majority of my poems were already written, though most had a little spit-and-polish or even major surgery before posting. About half a dozen were 'fresh writes' Thanks for the unerringly accurate critique - 'twas what I aimed for. Odd, isn't it, that a face you've admired in a detached way previously, instantly transforms to someone you wish to know in an altogether more intimate way. It seems – when this happens – that actual time measured by the clock is magically distorted, and appears to stretch and shrink at will: hours disappear in an instant, and seconds become eternity. Iechyd da [Good Health - Welsh] Mike
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Calliope

18 years 5 months ago

Bravo!

Where power corrupts,poetry cleanses.Where clocks tick ,time passes. Lacy,
theladyblue

theladyblue

18 years 4 months ago

flushed cheeks and a budding mind

I feel as if I am tweleve again, being romanced by Shakespere, yet at every end you remind me fully that I am a woman and help me to remember...had I known all there was to be known then, romance would have held so much more... thanks for the warm fuzzies!!! "For every shadow, no matter it's depth, is threatened by the morning's light..." <3 Emarie