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Oct 21, 2007
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Remember When
A girl sits
on the shores
of memory,
and watches
the past fly by,
Caught up
in the midst
of a revery,
she doesn't notice
the present cry,
A cool breeze
blows
on the golden shore,
as she knowingly opens
a once locked door,
Where past ,
present ,
and future
is swept
into the current
where memory slept,
With her eyes open wide,
She dives right in...
And drowns in the tide,
Of Remember When.
Comments
IKnowNoBox
18 years 6 months ago
A not too distant present
marcm
18 years 6 months ago
Well done. I love the