JulieMcCarty

Oct 13, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

ROTTEN BRAT

Rummages through my things

Opening every drawer

Taking whatever she wants

Telling lies to get me treated like a criminal

Even when I am innocent

Never caring about my feelings

Because she is selfish

Rotten to the core

Always wanting everything

Tearing my emotions apart

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Mark

18 years 7 months ago

Hey Julie !

You might want to pick up a book called Making Contact by Verginia Satir and bring that one under control and Transactional Analysis will be great too. First time I have ever seen this title - nice. Best of luck, Mark

JulieMcCarty

18 years 7 months ago

Thanks

Mark, I guess I was actually writing about when I was a kid and my sisters would get on my nerves and I was always the bad guy. Everything is good now. Glad you liked it :)

Mark

18 years 7 months ago

Thanks for the reality

I have known many mothers in place in your poetry and was relating to what I know. Thanks again, Mark

purplemoondoll

18 years 6 months ago

This Reminds me of

My kid sister when she was younger. I can totally relate! Nice work. Kaz x It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.

JulieMcCarty

18 years 6 months ago

Thanks Kaz

Glad you liked it. :)

Ink Dragon

18 years 6 months ago

It rings a bell

only I have a younger brother, but every word you wrote here is true about him. Sad to say so, because he is 29(!) now...ID P.S. please check "careing": should be "caring", I think.

JulieMcCarty

18 years 6 months ago

LOL

Glad you like it Ink Dragon :)

Jillian Botha

18 years 6 months ago

I loved this one!!!

Hi Julie this one made me smile... :-) it reminded me of my own little sister....and now my very own "little brat" my daughter. she is forever in my stuff!!! She believes that what is hers is hers, BUT whats belongs to Mommy is hers to!!! LOLOL Kind regards Feebie Mistakes happen, do not dwell on them, live them, mourn them and move on to better things. (PS: if that does not work eat lots and lots of chocolate)

JulieMcCarty

18 years 6 months ago

Thanks Feebie

I am glad you liked it !:)

sevenchild

18 years 6 months ago

just my opinion

but this 2 me isnt poetry it is something that everyone can relate 2 though 2 many pronouns 4 my liking but the subject tickles my heart cuz i got ya sista!-valene