Our evening motorcycle ride

I really appreciate love poems, and I like the concept being portrayed in this piece. I think it has a good rhythm to it, but I personally think it could be a bit more descriptive by embracing the environment and creating more of a vision towards the perspective of the road and the distance in which the riders are following. I think it's a good poem, and I get positive images projected into my mind from it. but, I'd love to re read this poem if you ever chose to re write it. so in turn, I could read it and indeed feel as though I had just experienced the same dream! keep writing. I hope this wasn't too harsh of a critique.

There is nothing that you can say to explain the release of going down the highway to someone who hasn't experienced it, or won't appriciate it; My serenity level is directly proportional to my tan lines, good for you