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Dreams long forgotten
Dreams long forgotten
Dreams are what form the very being of existence
for these are what keeps one going, persevering
constantly striving, fighting to keep these alive
trying to envision ones future, ensuring
the continued evolution for generations to come
for our dreams may never come to pass in our life time
but may be passed down through the ages
and once they have been studied and found ever so sublime
once they have obtained the true approval
only then are they able to be realized and brought to fruition
but what of those who have given up on their dreams?
When for them, life is nothing what it seems
for they have reached this point through
a long painful journey only to reach this
these people go unnoticed by you
for you walk by them and you totally miss
their vacant, hopeless stares
their empty, sad eyes devoid of all warmth
for their dreams have slowly dwindled away
for them dreams and hopes no longer seem to stay
what is to be done for these dreamless souls?
How can some form of hope be restored?
Do we wait until they have grown frail and old
or do we start now, so that their dreams to can some day be restored?
Dreams come in many forms, hope of fame
dreams of love, new beginnings, eternal wealth
dreams of journeys not yet taken
and for parents, dreams of their children’s health
we all need to have these no matter how big, or small
for dreams are not ours alone to covet
but they are there for everyone, so lets restore these
so that hope is once again there for us all….
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