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Hauntings of a different color
Hauntings of a different color
Images of times come and gone
Play themselves out in her mind
Regrets take hold of her heart
And after all this time, pain still rips her apart
She feels torn in two
One part still cares, still worries
While the other wants to erase all traces of you
From her heart and from her soul
For as we all do
When we enter another’s life
We become a piece of their heart
And we add color to their soul
In most instances it brightens
This person from the inside out
But when you entered her life
The only color you added was black
A black which slowly darkened
Her soul, and instead of becoming
A piece of her heart, as others do
You became the knife that ripped it to shreds
And yet there is that small part of her
That still wonders about you
How you are and what you do
Are you happy and cared for?
It is these thoughts and feelings
She needs to put to an abrupt end
For you are now foe, and will never again
Be referred to or seen as friend
Rest assured she will move on
You will no longer plague her thoughts
And once all trace of you is gone
She will truly realize how hard she has fought!
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