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PERU

The wailing and the errie winds marked its arrival,

as light chosed darkness like a carnival.

It choked the ground,as our replicas fumbled like yellow fever.

The earth crust had a nice dance as it litters.

Many buildings danced in unison as they got buried with our replicas.

It was in Peru,

the paradise i planned this june.

peace and awesome living were their cocoons,

but nature rose and spat deaths and typhoons.

Ah! nature brought pains to a nation,

Three thirty in devastation.

So untrue,but it’s on CNN.

But cry no more.

He has seen your tears,

it’s not going to happen again.

Cry no more.

— ellisville, Aug 18, 2007

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