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time is gone/a time/you where there

 

"Time is gone""a time""you where there""take me out of this world"

 

time is gone for me noone cares

when i am gone. who will care?
just who? my time is over for the

ones who did carei died of a

broken heart.

 

a time where i feel no hurt

a time with none,but you.

a time i only live for is,

being with you.

 

you where the to protect me

when i was young. you made me laugh

when i was sad. you talk to me when i was bord or crazy,

jesus you done some many things fro me but that greattest was letting me be born.

THANK-YOU

 

take me out of this world, i don’t want to live no more

with out you with me! i made my mistakes now i am done, please take me out and to another time and world.

with you next to me jesus as we sit on the waters of heaven.

— am i loved, Aug 16, 2007

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