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Aug 16, 2007
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time is gone/a time/you where there
"Time is gone""a time""you where there""take me out of this world"
time is gone for me noone cares
when i am gone. who will care?
just who? my time is over for the
ones who did carei died of a
broken heart.
a time where i feel no hurt
a time with none,but you.
a time i only live for is,
being with you.
you where the to protect me
when i was young. you made me laugh
when i was sad. you talk to me when i was bord or crazy,
jesus you done some many things fro me but that greattest was letting me be born.
THANK-YOU
take me out of this world, i don’t want to live no more
with out you with me! i made my mistakes now i am done, please take me out and to another time and world.
with you next to me jesus as we sit on the waters of heaven.
— am i loved, Aug 16, 2007
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