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you saw me/ thy conforth me

 

"you saw me"" thy conforth me"

you saw me before i was born

you seen me when i was young,

you saw me when i was old, and

when i die.

At heaven gates,

jesus i hope you wait for me there.

 

everytime i was ill

everytime i was crying,

everytime i try to die

you where there to confort me.

everyday when i am hurt

everyday when i wake in pain,

everyday when i wasn’t loved

you where there to love me.

my lord where ever your at,

thank you fro all you have done.

— am i loved, Aug 16, 2007

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