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You said


You and i said

Over and over again

U are the one that i love

-

Saying that to me

Anytime we talked.

I feel so great bout my self.

Day by day i couldn’t wait to

talk to

You. my heart always said i am

Only for you.

U as well thought i

Was your only, but

I found our

Love is gone.now i am very

Lonely.But you always told me you willn’t

Never brake my heart.As

Time goes bye i want you to know

Before you say good-bye i

Really mean i never brake you

A time thou you don’t care? you

Kindly told me you loved me but we can’t be

Everynite now i cry about

 

Me and you together again.

Everynite i cry because i will always love you

no matter what you say or do…

YOU-SAID YOU WILLN’T
BRAKE ME…………. i still love ya

AR BAll

— am i loved, Aug 16, 2007

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