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Aug 16, 2007
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A heart beat
a heart beat
do you hear that?
a beatting noise when your
near me? i hope so cause
it only beats for you.
do you hear the beatting
of the pain when you broken
my heart?????
beatting and bleeding,
everytime i breath.
do you hear the beatting
of sorrow when your near?
do you? when you near,
as you see i am lost and
forrgoten.
i died,but ididn;t die, just
my heart.
do you hear it?
it only beats and bleeds from you
a drop of blood running down
my chest in your heart and grave.
do you hear the beat, of death?
cause you are there…
my heart only beats for you.
— am i loved, Aug 16, 2007
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