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A heart beat


a heart beat

do you hear that?
a beatting noise when your

near me? i hope so cause

it only beats for you.

do you hear the beatting

of the pain when you broken

my heart?????

beatting and bleeding,

everytime i breath.

 

do you hear the beatting

of sorrow when your near?

do you? when you near,

as you see i am lost and

forrgoten.

i died,but ididn;t die, just

my heart.

do you hear it?
it only beats and bleeds from you

a drop of blood running down

my chest in your heart and grave.

do you hear the beat, of death?

cause you are there…

my heart only beats for you.

— am i loved, Aug 16, 2007

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