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my heart is crying


3:My heart is crying

 

everytime i speak

my heart is crying.

 

everyday when i am forgotten,

my heart is crying.

 

when i talk i cry, evern if i seem

happy,but i am not cause

my heart is crying.

everytime i breatheveryday whe i am hurtwhen i am alive i am sad

as my heart beats

it cries,

as my heart beats it

screams.

as my heart beat it says

its in pain,

only everday when i am alive i

am sad.

my

 

heart cries…my heart is crying….

— am i loved, Aug 16, 2007

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