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I finally got my head together, now my body is falling apart.

 

I finally got my head together, now my body is falling apart.
by Jim Nasium

I finally got my head together
now my body is falling apart
finally found what I think is love
but once again I’ve a broken heart
I can go get all dressed up
but I’ve got no place to go
so broke I’m saving up to be poor
but there’s one thing I KNOW

I finally got my head together
now my body is falling apart
I’ve tried my best but got no where
I’m too old for a new start
I sit alone by monitors light
silently I write and draw
about the places I have been
and all the things I saw….

Jim Nasium
http://www.gymart.com

— JimNasium, Aug 10, 2007

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