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thanks
thanks for the years and the memorys we made
i will remember them now before they start to fade
i want to thank you for being willing and able
even though in the end you made my life unstable
i remember it now catching you being flirtatious
even in front of me couldn’t you be more gracious
i remember it all even watching you pack
even after it all i just wish to go back
i remember the day clearly you said it was the end
and i felt like i was losing my only good friend
and at first i blamed it on myself cause i put up the resraining order
till i found out about her the new girl working on the boarder
of nj and ny did you think i wouldn’t find out
to think back than i was right to have my dought
you cheating on me and didn’t even care
looking back now i wonder how could you dare
dare to hurt me like that when you said you were inlove
that i was the one for you sent from up above
can i ask you something when did we get on the wrong tract
i thought it was just a set back
and when i got the phone call about the girl in your life
all my dreams were shattered about being your wife
you told me not to overreact that it was not true
but in your eyes at that moment thats when i new
i was done with the lies and all the bad moods
i am with someone new now and i am unafraid
cause he is nothing like you he don’t hit me for the mastakes i made
for me this is goodbye, the clouser i need
i hope in life that you do succeed
goodbye to you and the love that we had
and i don’t regreat a thing even though i said i did when i was mad
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