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thanks

thanks for the years and the memorys we made

i will remember them now before they start to fade

i want to thank you for being willing and able

even though in the end you made my life unstable

i remember it now catching you being flirtatious

even in front of me couldn’t you be more gracious

i remember it all even watching you pack

even after it all i just wish to go back

i remember the day clearly you said it was the end

and i felt like i was losing my only good friend

and at first i blamed it on myself cause i put up the resraining order

till i found out about her the new girl working on the boarder

of nj and ny did you think i wouldn’t find out

to think back than i was right to have my dought

you cheating on me and didn’t even care

looking back now i wonder how could you dare

dare to hurt me like that when you said you were inlove

that i was the one for you sent from up above

can i ask you something when did we get on the wrong tract

i thought it was just a set back

and when i got the phone call about the girl in your life

all my dreams were shattered about being your wife

you told me not to overreact that it was not true

but in your eyes at that moment thats when i new

i was done with the lies and all the bad moods

i am with someone new now and i am unafraid

cause he is nothing like you he don’t hit me for the mastakes i made

for me this is goodbye, the clouser i need

i hope in life that you do succeed

goodbye to you and the love that we had

and i don’t regreat a thing even though i said i did when i was mad

 

— randysmom2007, Aug 08, 2007

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