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loved

i’m misunderstood by the one who care
or do they really there never there

i need someone to love me for me
i’m crying out but no one can see

no one trys to talk things threw
anymore not even you

love me for me or don’t love me at all
how come you watch as i fall

no one to help when i scream in pain
they all got each other but what do i gain

who’s there for me when i cry
no one to talk to they walk right on by

i need someone to help me threw
but anymore i dont even have you

all i am asking is when will i be loved

— randysmom2007, Aug 08, 2007

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