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why
you came into my life one quiet day
telling me you love me and wanting to stay
i turned you down until i new you good
and i kept wondering if really i should
as far as i new you were a nice guy
never making me second guess or asking why
but after 3 years together i finally can see
that it was something else you didn’t want me for me
but its to late for that cause i’ve fallen inlove
to me your my gift created from god up above
and we have a one year old that would never understand
if you no longer wanted to be my man
what should i tell him if you were to leave
its him you would be leaving him you’d decieve
you tell me you love me and tell me you care
than tell me why you are never there
this is your last chance to make things work
i am not being mean or being a jerk
i am tired of hurting and tired of the pain
if i were to stay what do i gain
please tell me you love me and i will to
cause baby no matter what i hope you know its true
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