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dear little baby boy

just four days ago your first birthday had past
and i still can’t believe how the year had went so fast

i remember when i first held you and looked into your eyes
i new then that i could have cryed

because you looked so beauitful from head to toe
and from that day on i vowed i could never let you go

the months they flew by quickly and than you said dad
and even though i was happy it kind of made me sad

when you started crawling i couldnt help but smile with glee
because i was just so happy that you belong to me

and when you took your first steps i smiled even more
you took your first three steps and than fell softly on the floor

i hope when you grow you know how much i care
and that always in your life i will be there..

if you need a helping hand just call out my name
no matter what it is i will love you just the same

— randysmom2007, Aug 08, 2007

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