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how do you feel

DONT PLAY GAMES WITH ME ANY MORE
IF YOU WANT TO LEAVE THERES THE DOOR
I CANT KEEP CRYING HERE IN PAIN
WHAT’S THAT LEAVE ME WHAT DO I GAIN
I MISS YOU SOMETIMES BUT I’LL NEVER SAY
THAT YOU ARE ALWAYS ON MY MIND EVEN NOW TODAY
YOU’LL NEVER KNOW HOW MUCH I’M HAPPY
EVEN THOUGH I TELL YOU I ALWAYS FEEL CRAPPY
WITH YOU IN MY ARMS I SPENT SOME OF THE BEST YEARS OF MY LIFE
I THOUGHT THAT EVUNUALLY I WOULD BECOME YOUR WIFE
THINGS HAVENT CHANGED INCLUDING ME AND YOU
I WANT TO THANK YOU FOR ALL THE YEARS AND ALL THAT WE BEEN THREW
I’M LETTING YOU LIVE AND PASTEING ON A SMILE
WHILE IN MY HEART ITS YOU NUMBER I WANT TO DIAL
I NEED YOU HERE WITH ME TONITE
SO WE CAN TALK AND MAKE THINGS RIGHT
YOU ARE STILL WITH ME TODAY
THOUGH YOUR HEART SEEMS FAR AWAY
WHY CANT I MAKE THINGS RIGHT
WHY CANT I BE IN YOUR ARMS TONITE

— randysmom2007, Aug 08, 2007

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