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one true love

SHE DIDN’T KNOW MUCH OF LOVE WHEN SHE WAS GROWING UP
PEOPLE AROUND HER DIDN’T SHOW IT ALL TO MUCH
SO HOW WAS SHE TO KNOW A BOY COULD KNOCK HER OFF HER FEET
HOW COULD SHE HAVE KNOWN ABOUT THE BOY THAT SHE WOULD MEET
SHE DIDNT THINK MUCH AT FIRST CAUSE HE WAS JUST HER FRIEND
AND THATS HOW SHE THOUGHT THAT IT WOULD HAVE TO END
BUT IT HAPPENED SO QUICKLY BEFORE SHE COULD EVEN BLINK
THOUGHTS ENTERED HER MIND SHE COULDNT EVEN THINK
SHE COULDNT TELL HIM HOW SHE FELT
SHE DIDN’T WANT TO HAVE HIS HEART BREAK OR HAVE IS HEART MELT
SHE TURNED HIM DOWN FOR A WHILE THAN SHE GAVE HIM A CALL
HOPEING FOR THE BEST AND HOPING HE’D NEVER LET HER FALL
SHE GAVE IT JUST A WEEK TO SEE IF IT WOULD WORK
MAYBE HE WAS MEAN MAYBE JUST A JERK
BUT AFTER THE WEEK WAS UP THE MONTHS THEY JUST FLEW BYE
HE NEVER LEFT HER LONELY NEVER LET HER CRY
THEY GOT TO KNOW EACH OTHER AND QUICKLY FEEL INLOVE
SOMETIMES LATE AT NIGHT SHE WOULD THANK THE LORD FOR HER ANGEL UP ABOVE
THINGS ARE NOT SO GREAT NOW THE PAIN IS BREAKING HER HEART
BUT SHE VOWED THAT FOREVER THEY WOULD NEVER HAVE TO PART
JULY 10 A BABY BOY WAS BORN FOR THEM TO LOVE FOREER
JUST ANOTHER PIECE OF THE PUZZLE THATS KEEPING THEM TOGETHER
HES A PRECIOUS ONE THEY WILL NEVER GIVE AWAY
A BABY BOY WAS BORN OUT OF LOVE HE REMINDS THEM EVERYDAY
OF HOW THEY MET AND THE LOVE THAT HAS BEEN THERE
HER HEART NO LONGER HURTS NOW SHE WANTS HIM TO KNOW SHE CARES
SHE IS HAPPY MORE THAN SHE HAS EVER BEEN IN HER LIFE
SHE WILL LONG AFTER SHE BECOMES HIS WIFE.
A FAMILY OF 2 LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT
A FAMILY OF 3 NOW THINGS ARE JUST SO RIGHT
I LOVE THEM ALL AND ALWAYS WILL
NO MATTER WHAT I’LL LOVE THEM STILL
A TRUE STORY WAS WRITTEN HERE TODAY
ABOUT A LOVE OF A FAMILY THAT WILL NEVER GO AWAY
TO EVERYONE OUT THERE I HOPE YOU FIND SOMEONE TO STAY
WHO WILL KNOW ALL YOUR PROBLEMS AND WILL NEVER GO AWAY

— randysmom2007, Aug 08, 2007

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