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final goodbye

the hardest thing i ever had to do was walk away from you that day
so much we had sayed and so much left to say
i didn’t think it would hurt so bad when i’m the one who said good-bye
now i sit up in bed and all i want to do is cry
i know why i told you we were threw that night
all we did was argue, all we did was fight
you told me that you loved me but you didnt care
can you explain to me than why did you even dare
can you answer me now what can you do?
cause hunny it’s going to be hard to get over you
i thought that you would try and let us be
but i guess you know you cant stop me
there’s nothing left to say but i’ll love you forever
and when the babys older i’ll tell him about our time together
i know you are hurting and its ok to cry
but its time for me to say goodbye

— randysmom2007, Aug 08, 2007

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