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energy in green
deep green and engulfed in solitude, i always reach out towards the likeliness of buoyancy
He touches me, and all sorrow is transformed into a secret, while my heart melts in the hand that beholds the forest.
Its extremely frightening to know that i trust this desirable umbra, more than myself.
must be the signature pressed at first contact and that secluded amorous stare.
All the dimented desire flows out of me and swims in this pool of ecstasy, created in passion and emotion, by that honeyed green air.
It engulfs me, while i discern and welcome the everlasting thrill whithering up and down my spine. .
every look and tactility furnished so fervent it makes me stop breathing and thinking. appreciating that raw and pliable callow.
every brush of lips,fingers, and cryptic amity allows me to discern these feelings so deep,from that puposeful aversion he clutches.
I will embrace this resplendent and unobscured adulation so creative that it wants to combust in the mere of my lovers green endowment.
This is it for me,abiding finally. the revalation of true benevolence and personage.
Can this assuredly be, all my apprehension and enchantment will lye forever in the hand that beholds the forest.
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