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my master deception

theres a definate mechanism to this solemness of procreation, breath and sight that transformed out of intrinsic depths of reality.

Its alive and earnist,  flowing freely through and above all forms of reason and logic. unable to realize the magnitude of deception created by blind eyes that bleed for pathetic deeds.

This euphoric state of mind is eternally forgotten by real time sight through closed thoughts and actions that quickly transforms into hatred for oneself.

It grows and feeds into an illusion of self fulfillment, that will be awkwardly magnanimous and content. fear is the ever growing purposeful illusionn of  fake power. love and hate that will never again be felt

 

stuck between these parasites of life, i have felt for an extremity of time. fallen down through the crevases slowly. burn for me while i reach above and grope this  transluscent hand

sliding through all actions of time and space, i evaluate each and every heart i clawed through in order to reach that contentment. tugging away my self worth is that preciseness of hate i use for that final break

Hope and truth are ethics  which are no longer perceived through the depths of blue and white eyes.

fear and death are the reasoning behind this weakness of total population cowardice, and shadowy black and arrogant lies

No soul can perceive the extremity of which they scream tied down and bowing to overpowered fools. it is weakness and lack of mind depth that comforts this logic.

conform within a bubble of lies; wallow in every sarcastic word; float above it with hateful and pitiful cries from the damned.  Can u feel the life blooming inside and dreading death? Can u relate to the dripping decision to slice,rip, and slip. isnt it pathetic….

 

 

— anonymitylll, Jul 31, 2007

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