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John Smith

Nervous I seemed. Nervous I was. Uniqueness bounded you together. Captivated by your eyes. With every look they trapped me. Lying in your arms. Paralyzed by the sensation of your touch. Awkward was your kiss yet so tender. You smelled so sweet and tasted so astounding. Few opportunities you allowed me. Never knew the real reason why we parted ways. You never enlightened me to the truth. We were almost parallel. Extensive my wait seemed. My chance withered in my hands. Confused by the whole ordeal. I spoiled the whole thing some how. Months have passed. Still I question what could have been. Unsure are my thoughts to long you have been in my mind. Still seeing your striking blue eyes looking at me. Still feel your arms wrapped around me. You amused me with every peek. Unique you are very much so.

— RandomThoughts, Jul 27, 2007

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