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He who dwells in my dreary mentality

Are you alive? Do you feel? Can you see me? Can you taste the bitterness on your tongue? Do you know what you have done? Do you know how much you was loved? Do you know how much misery you caused? You made everything distorted. You caused hurt. Never understood. They ask why? So why? Knocked down by what you created. Never felt resentful towards you. Haunted by their faces. Nameless and faceless is what they are to you. They are possessed by you. Question your existence. Never a second thought. Fears chase you everyday. Consumed by fire in their eyes. They know you better than you know yourself. Narcissistic.Vain.Selfish.Conceited. This is what you are.
— RandomThoughts, Jul 27, 2007

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