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A STORY OF ''LOVE''

                                  LOVE

 

                                                     LOVE

It is a hot summer there is no water in the streams .only dried grasses were found

Though it is thick forest the sun’s attracity iwas very cruel.

They are slowly comming  in search of water. due to their long walk both of them were

too tired.I na along distance  a little pond  seemed as a heaven to them.

They slowly walked and reached that pond. Unfortunately  the quantity of water in the

pond is too least and insufficient for the both.

Male and female were both inserted their mouths in the water surface

 seconds ran as minutes and hours. both of them were died  due to thirst.

the water in the pond is enough to one either male or female but the both of them

pretended as drinking water .but didn’t do that.

due to acute thirst both of them were dead.

Here the both male and female loved  each verymuch adn each thought that the other

would drinkthewater.to satisfy the other

both pretended insted of drinking. ,their death establishes the depth of love

  here the male and female  are deers of the forest.

TRUE LOVE ALWAYS  EXPECTS OTHER’S SATISFACTION

 

SAKTHI RAVICHANDRAN