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Uncle Tomahawk

 

We kids robbed people’s dinner plates

Of nuts, of grapes, and of the sweetest dates.

 

But most of all, when distant

Folk came from anywhere

 

To our old house in Delaware

 

To sit down to cop a bite,

We’d rob them blind (and with delight!).

 

Especially dear old Uncle Tomahawk.

 

When we stole food from him,

He would definite squawk.

 

Oh, he made it so much fun!

He was by far the bestest one.

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Quillsvein1

18 years 9 months ago

Sometimes

you really remind me of Marcel Proust, with your painstaking recantations of childhood memories. it almost sounds idyllic, though i hardly believe anyone's childhood was truly idyllic. maybe i'm wrong, but you pull it off well. pleasant read!
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Conect11

18 years 9 months ago

family

dinner was so rare in my childhood. Excellent to see you robbing food from the plates, especially the nice healthy stuff instead of hiding by the dog, lol! Once again whimsical and reminiscent. Fondness, that's the word that comes to my mind, fondness. I do wonder if "definite" should be "definitely" (sic?) though. Mark