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Fresh Roses

Pale blush pink to
searing crimson red
Pure bright white to
sweet sunshine yellow

These fresh roses tilled
in strong gardens at their
beginning are not born flawed

Slowly emerging, one by one
from seeds sewn with the
love of sunweathered hands
galiantly reaching toward the
sky with ambient pride

Dew droplets gently carressing
each and every petal
A heavenly scent like no other

Our sunkissed fresh roses
are like a gentle tap one
one’s life, ever so worthy
of life’s celebration

 

— workingharleylady, Jul 19, 2007

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