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A Heart made of silk
A heart made of red satin or silk.
Skin as pure a new drawn milk.
Lips of ruby red that could scorch the fires of hell.
A fragrance so sweet fills the air with a wondrous smell.
Hair long and flowing like the river of repossession.
Eyes hazel and deep and affectionate with loving expression.
Eyelashes long as summer fields of un-ripen corn.
Such trust and innocence as a baby newly born.
Fingers long and slender adorned with mans most precious metals.
A life liken to a flower with many golden petals.
Legs long and slender, true as any Heart.
A warmth full of longing needing to be a part.
These special things are my memories of you.
Deeply held conviction a love so true.
If life were to end in a second of time.
I would take you to eternity knowing you would always be mine.
My hand is held out to you in a friendship never known.
My heart is but yours to hold and to own.
My soul is joined to yours by a silver wire.
Forever and together our love will never tire.
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