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What Do You Think?

 

What Do You Think? 

By: robin49707
5/23/2006

 

<!–begin story–>Have I become someone
worthy?
Am I who I was suppose
To be?
A mother of six.
Not a buissness woman.
I am life smart not
book smart.
I beleive in god.
Not evolution but
creation.
I beleive in truness
not pretending.
I beleive keep your
friend’s near.
But your enemie’s nearer.
I beleive in family.
Because thats all you
really got.
What do you think?
Am I worthy?

— blueeyed bettyboop, Jul 14, 2007

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