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The Spineless Victim
The spineless victim
By: robin49707
5/22/2006
<!–begin story–>The spineless victim lay with head on knee’s.
Trying to make other’s except his uncanny plea’s.
His eye’s looking drawn.
Unmistakenly devious.
As other’s would say down right mischeivious.
Eye contact non -existant.
Like a plan was co- existant.
Drawn to an unreal source.
Which led him to divorce.
The storie’s the spineless man told.
Led him to fold and curl up like a mold.
The spineless victim lay lazy.
Jealous of those zealous.
The spineless victim lay quiet and ill with sadness.
He created from all his badness.
Oh how i’d hate to be the spineless victim. <!–end story–>
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