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Its 9 o'clock

 

Nine O"clock 

By: robin49707
5/23/2006

 

<!–begin story–>Looking at the sky.
Approaching nine o"clock.
I look at the sky
through my window.
It still a shade of blue.
With a light color
of redness.

<!–end story–>

 

— blueeyed bettyboop, Jul 14, 2007

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