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Donna with the impure cover

Donna with the impure cover

By: robin49707
7/19/2006

 

<!–begin story–>Errect with "greatest anamosity"
Bearing throughout- her dingy casement!
Her dingy casement of doubt.
With a a wryface!
A wrylip of "dissolved idol-hour’s".
Idol-hour’s dissolved of negativity!
And best offer worth.
Investigating through- out her cascade
She administers quite indignity.
To evreyone she be exposed to!
Even to subject’s she isnt!
Cross examinating based
On assumption
Attracting herself to daily corruption
The donna with the dishonest
cover. <!–end story–>

— blueeyed bettyboop, Jul 14, 2007

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