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Summer

Summer 

By: robin49707
1/21/2007

 

<!–begin story–>Heartwarming light rain.
distracting green wonder.
Canopy in Heaven flowing light blue garland.

Tree’s standing big and ablebodied
with white aglow flower!
The sun beaming.
Making me feel" so attentive"!

Lilac’s cascading in cluster’s.
Transforming into different elegant variation!
Catapillar’s casting their wing’s.
Making me aspire to so many affirmitive thing’s!

Appendages to advance.
And also appendages to adapt.
Crafting me to be an ablebodied individual. <!–end story–>

 

— blueeyed bettyboop, Jul 14, 2007

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