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Indicate We Were Intended
Indicate we were Intended
By: robin49707
5/19/2006
<!–begin story–>Take the petal from my mane.
Give me indication that we are an exquisite yoke
Indicate to me life is cloudless.
Give me indication that you really dote upon me
Indicate to me that that we are limitless.
Lets gallop through the acreage happily ever after.
In our eyes will be no rafter.
Tell me we were intended.
That existance will never have to be extinct.
Let’s eat from the right tree.
In our future destiny will come to be.
We will be foresaken!.
Indicate we were intended.
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