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Shall I partake?

shall I partake?

Bubble gum bubble gum in a dish
How many peices do you wish?
What am I being offered?
How do I know how much to take?
I better do it right for my sake!
How much will be at stake, "for me"?
For partaking in one peice!

Robin Connon

Copyright ©2007 Robin Connon

 

 


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