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Jul 14, 2007
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Oddity peeping In
Oddity peeping in
Watching his existance slowly fading with sweat’s and feaver.
His offspring fueding amongst eachother!
Helter skelter you never will wittness!
No apathy for the one departing this world.
No contiousness he was even there!
I was an oddity peeping in!
I walked over to him and grasped his hand.
Whispering in his ear,I see you!
And god does too.
He will take care of you!
I love you.
Robin Annette Connon
Copyright ©2007 Robin Connon
— blueeyed bettyboop, Jul 14, 2007
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