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Jul 14, 2007
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Outsider Looking in
Outsider looking in
Watching his life slowly ending
With sweat’s and feaver
His children argueing amongst eachother
turmoil you’ll never see
No apathy for the one leaving this world
No awareness he was even there
I was an outsider looking in
I walked to him
And held his hand
Whispering in his ear
I see you and god does to
He will take care of you
I love you.
Robin Connon
Copyright ©2007 Robin Connon
— blueeyed bettyboop, Jul 14, 2007
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