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Jul 08, 2007
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He is Dead
Aye but I said.
I knew that man was dead.
Something to do the way he looked.
There was no chance that I mistook.
The expression on his face.
I’m sure he wished that he was in some other place.
But no, he was lying there staring into to space.
A body dead , no grace.
It was sorta funny, in a funny sorta way.
There was I full, optimism ready to play.
And then the tide brought in its cargo.
A shell less Escargot.
No dignity, lying there for all to see.
I guess the soul discarded its body coat, now free.
Who was he, it matters not now.
I moped my soaking brow.
In a panic what to do.
As he lay there staring, missing a shoe.
That was my cue.
I left and never looked back.
— kinganeye, Jul 08, 2007
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