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Hell

Life its just a game
We play the game until our life is over
When out turn is over
Another takes our place
And we retire to the heavens
They say if a sinner
Thou eternity is in hell
Hell is here
Hell is to see loved ones pass away
Hell is to feel pain
Hell is to feel sorrow
Hell is a word thats more than a word
Hell
Is is here or is it
3000000 feet under ground

— poet_inside, Jul 07, 2007

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