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Final Goodbye

He lays in bed

With sadistic thoughts in his head

He looks to the left

Then to the right

His eyes stop on the gun and the knife

Wondering which one will take his life tonight

The black walls make him scream

Its all closeing in on him

Makeing it hard to breathe

No longer does he wish to see

He can’t handle the pain and blame to this degree

Just one more pill and he’ll be free

His soul is his final resting fee

He can’t stop the tears running down his face

He feels as if life is just a big disgrace

He said his final goodbye

To this so called life

No one will ever understand truely why

We all know he was a good guy

So we play songs for him on the other side

You will always be remembered

So in our eyes you never really die

— poet_inside, Jul 07, 2007

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