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Survive

A silent tear fell last night

No one saw, no one even had a clue

I never thought it could hurt

To simply say goodbye

You wouldn’t listen

You had already made up your mind

Youhurt me so bad

I had to pack and leave it all behind

Shattered to pieces

I will never be whole

Because of the pain you made me feel

Deep down inside

No longer will I cry

I will hide the pain

Continue life with pride

You haven’t won

I can still survive

— poet_inside, Jul 07, 2007

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