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if at first

 
 
although I’d like to drive a red
Ferrari
 
across the broad Pacific Ocean on to grand
Hawaii,
 
I also hope to be
quite funny …
 
and if at first I don’t succeed at that,
my honey,
 
I’m left awash in woe—
  and sorry

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Rottiestyl

Rottiestyl

18 years 10 months ago

Aw come on! You are too

Aw come on! You are too funny! I took this to mean that being funny is as remote as first, owning a Ferrari and second, having the ability to actually drive on water in a sports car with no floating gas stationsall the way to Hawaii. Did I get that right? Lol! I loved the simplicity my friend! K. Mulroney
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barbsdad2003

18 years 10 months ago

Yup!

You got it so right. And thanx. All yours all in fun, Chuckles