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Today

Today I’m writing you a poem, a poem from my heart.
Letting the words flow from my finger tips.
A poem of soft words for comfort to help heal your troubled soul.
To let you know that someone cares. That you are not alone in this world. That you are
loved by someone, somewhere!
Just hold on to life for you have to believe that you are special. And that God has a plan for your life.
So write down how you feel. It’s such a free feeling. You’ll feel better getting those feel-
ings out.
Share yourself with the world why wait? You might really make someone’s day by your
special way.
                                                                                                    By Julie Norton

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weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 11 months ago

Sorry Julie

I appreciate your sentiments, you clearly care and i don't want to put that down. But really this is just a string of advice. As a sort of atheist, more a pragmaticly spiritual person, I find the line "God has a plan for your life" offensive and stupid. Did god have a plan for the inhabitants of Hiroshima or the occupants of the World Trade Center? This is not poetry.
Julie50

Julie50

18 years 10 months ago

you have a right to your opinion!

This poem was intended to up lift those who are feeling down and with no hope! I respect your opinion but God does have a plan,and clearly you must not believe. This site is for constructive criticism not judging anothers believes! So thank you but no thanks!