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Jan 27, 2007
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Vanishing
The sun burns brilliantly.
Blazing threw my soul.
To balm my numb body.
Making me feel once again.
I can feel it liquefy the ice within.
Cold water seeping down my arms and legs.
Creating crystal tears, dropping form my fingertips.
You are my sunbeam, my blazing star.
You are my ardent light.
— NatalieMBallestero, Jan 27, 2007
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