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Feb 19, 2007
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gardens are for growing gardeners
In distant place, a barren land
blistered, beaten by sun and sand
God whispered me, a silent plan
plant a garden here young man
Here my Lord? Scorched and dry
rock and thistle, sand here lie
all I plant can only die
But what you say I surely try
Give no heed to what you see
All I say will come to be
give care and all concern to me
tend this ground on bended knee
so man prayed as had been said
gave all his work to faith instead
the ground he broke and daily fed
from heart and calloused hands that bled
the sun became his burning crown
but spared the consecrated ground
Destruction rode the wind around
but not the work that he put down
Gentle rain with evening came
It fell, no where else the same
the ground grew rich, dark and tame
all other ground but ruin and shame
He labored long, spread hope and seed
Kept from there the nagging weed
He daily prayed the gardens need
His love became the gardens feed
From all the scorched and blistered land
came plush, a green out of the sand
From tender heart and callouse hand
erupted splender from a plan
Outstreched upon his wondrous ground
face impale in the dirt he found
as though in earth a man could drown
He sealed with thanks each single mound
Then came again the voice once heard
It trembled in his heart as word
Well you've done and well you serve
all with heart and steady nerve
I give you now much greater worth
A finished garden not of earth
prepared for you before your birth
Her only need to make her first
Give only gentle, tender care
only truth must come to bear
bathe her deep in daily prayer
All harshness, any anger spare
Give not to much to other men
She grows upon the time you spend
Take not from her to give to them
they are pretenders, she the friend
Give all concern to what you grow
each day examine what you sow
All you give, in time will show
depth of care, revealed in row
She is the vessle of my plan
Shaped and moulded by my hand
She is the vessle of my plan
She is sent to grow a man.
Comments
alan
19 years 2 months ago
Thanks, Actually there are
Thanks,
Actually there are few places for quotes. I will edit when there is time. thanks again.
alan
Cathy
19 years 2 months ago
Awesome
Awesome write.. I could feel it as I read it.. And it went very smoothly I thought.. Very wel done.. I would like to ask you permision to print a copy if I may.. I would like to have it as a reminder that If only you pray and do what he ask.. You will have what you need.. Impressive.. Ty for shareing..
Cathy
alan
19 years 2 months ago
permission granted
I'm glad it inspired-feel free to use it and thanks for the feedback.
alan
R.R.J.Sebacher
19 years ago
Sonnet
tee4eva921
18 years 7 months ago
Very Nice
Sinbadthesailorman
18 years 7 months ago
loved it Iam New me thinks it's hard to hold anyones atenion
tbeaudet
18 years 6 months ago
Very well written and held my interest